Latest revision as of 12:40, 16 June 2015

There seems to me confusion in this sentence:

It is a "mini-guide for Dummies" was written with a tinge gamer, that is to say, made for an encyclopedia written by and for Ryzom "avatars". 

When you say 'tinge gamer,' i assume you are meaning, "written by a gamer with a little bit of a gamers point of view for the Encyclopedia for other players?"

Actually, a better way to say it is, " ...was written by a gamer with a little bit of a gamers point of view for other players, to be included in the encyclopedia." (or Wiki instead of 'Encyclopedia')

Naema (talk) 23:46, 8 June 2015 (CEST)Naema

I was who wrote de original text. In that time it was only for Encyclopatys. In my mind I was trying to make an Encyclopedia with a RP tint. I.e. It was not a "avatar" writing in te wiki but Zo'ro-argh itself. I don't know if I explain well my idea. But, maybe, looking to my profile you can understand me. Indeed, if you go to my fr:Utilisateur:Zorroargh you can see that it was filled as people fill profile in Wikipedia. Do not hesitate to ask me more about it... -- Zo'ro-Argh ^Woren Siloy 14:47, 9 June 2015 (CEST)

Thank you Zoroargh, :)

I am just trying to learn editing in Wiki and this is my first discovery where I can maybe help. My goal is to make translations better understood by English speaking people. I want to put the sentences into better English.

I did not understand this sentence, so i wanted to edit it better if that is ok? It is good practice for me too :)

Naema (talk)Naema 6/15/15

No, no! It's me that I have to thank you :)

I'm vary happy that someone corrects my "basic English". And for me too, it is also a good practice, so I can improve my knowledge of English :)

-- Zo'ro-Argh ^Woren Siloy 13:40, 16 June 2015 (CEST)